NaPoWriMo #10
Un Love
| You eat munchies When you greet me The work you undertake: are opinions You fail to recognise Your Laugh I could forgive you |
like a horse masticates on carrot, it is as welcoming as Zyklon B is obsolete, like male nipples, to you as unwanted as bad childhood memories? the opening bars of ‘All you need is love’, is a prerequisite to migraine. But it is the boredom that jars. |
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This one turned into an experiment with column poetry. I’ve always wanted to try a dual reading poem. The napowrimo prompt ‘a poem of dislike’ became a little staid, with similes quickly losing impact. I am happy with this as a first attempt.
Oíche mhaith.
Fionn Coughlan-Wills.
Fionn Wills 